[IELTS] Hobbies that require technology

Jake/English 2019. 6. 20. 00:03 Posted by JAKE_SLEEPY
IELTS Writing Task 2

(Question)
Some people prefer hobbies that require technology, while others do not. Discuss both views and give your opinion.


Planning:
1. prefer hobbies that require technology
(1) state-of-the-art technologies can be enjoyable for those who are eager to experience innovation.
(2) hobbies that can be challenging. technology is related to advanced knowledge. have benefits that we can learn about technology
2. prefer hobbies that do not require technology
(1) those who want to be relaxed from daily routine, less tension when learning something that is not concerned with technology.
(2) the level of difficulty is relatively low compared to hobbies with technology, have free access to hobbies.



There is a group of people who are fond of technology-requiring hobbies, whereas there are some who prefer traditional hobbies. Even though hobbies which do not need any technology have several benefits, I firmly believe that hobbies that demand high technologies are more preferable.

To begin with, there are several benefits that can be experienced when having conventional hobbies. Firstly, it is recommendable for those who want to be relaxed from daily routine. This is mainly due to the less tension when learning something that is not concerned to technological knowledge. In addition, hobbies with less theories can provide people with free access, since they are mostly not required to know complicated background knowledge, but substantially associated with daily life. For example, it is the dedication and interests that enable potted plants to be well-grown, not knowing any knowledge of high technology.

On the contrary, I believe that there are some notable advantages when people have technological hobbies. First and foremost, state-of-the-art technologies can be enjoyable for those who are eager to experience innovation. Thanks to this point, people are able to feel that they are residing in an advanced age, and keeping up with modern society. For instance, the promising and being on the rising technology of DNN, acronym of Deep Neural Network, is applied for makers whose hobbies are related to creating electronics based on their preferences. Moreover, hobbies that are concerned with challenging technologies can give opportunities to be utilized for workplaces, which increase possibilities to be excellent and creative in jobs.

In conclusion, although having hobbies demanding no technology can offer several benefits, I strongly believe that the adequacy of cutting-edge technology is sufficient for people to take advantages from it while living in a modern society.