IELTS Writing Task 2
(Question)
Some stay-at-home parents think they need to be compensated by the government. Do you agree or disagree?
Planning
Yes
B1: Inevitably stay at home. Suspension of career development. Sacrifice for their family. Pitiful.
B2: Solutions.
Give opportunities to continue to develop career
- Online learning - time, distance are not constrained. Easy access to
- Activate vigorous stay-at-home work. - can obtain career development and earn money while in home.
It is said that parents who do not work should have compensation from the government. I steadfastly agree with the statement based on a primary reason and I think that the government has the obligation to improve their lives.
To begin with, there is a principal reason why parents who are stuck in their home need some reward. The capital reason is that parents have no choice but to suspend their career development. As they inevitably stay at home as a means of sacrificing for the family, government should be condemned for not coping with this issue. Every parent has one’s own dream to pursue, so owing to the abject circumstance, parents should not abandon their jobs, which can cause them not to feel their value. Moreover, it is pitiful when people perceive that they have no choice but to commit to their family without having any career.
I consider this phenomenon as a problem that needs an urgent solution to show support to all the mothers who have lost their careers just to take care of their family.
Firstly, online learning should be provided for caged parents, since time and distance are not constrained. In other words, they have free access to learning what they want, so they can have great opportunities to continue to develop their desired career. Secondly, it is recommendable for the government to provide the parents with stay-at-home works. This lead them to develop their careers as well as earn some amount of money while staying at home.
In conclusion, I believe that government should support parents who devote their time taking care of their children at home as they cannot continue to develop their career.
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