[IELTS] Using the Internet for living a full life

IELTS Writing Task 2

(Question)

It is not necessary to have access to the Internet to live a full life. What is your opinion?

Planning

I don’t agree

1. Have free access to the Internet without spending extra time to get places where they take place - time and money can be saved for transportation.

2. There are various kinds of entertainments that cannot be feasible in reality

   - games virtual reality can fulfill people’s desire that they imagine can be obsessed with…
3. Convenience of working in home

It is said that having access to the Internet is unnecessary in order to live a wonderful life. However, I firmly disagree with the statement based on two primary reasons.

To begin with, there are two principal ideas for supporting that the Internet positively affect people’s life. First and foremost, owing to the characteristic that provides people with having free access to the Internet, it becomes possible not to spend extra time and money in order to go to real places for enjoyment. Since people are dwelling on the modern society, I believe that they have rights to enjoy the benefits of the Internet. Moreover, there is a tendency that most people are already obsessed with smartphones these days. From this trend, It can be seen that people cannot live without the convenience of smartphones which makes their lives pleasing.

The other reason is that there are various kinds of entertainments that cannot be feasible in reality. For example, online games and contents related to virtual reality can fulfill people’s desire that they imagine. In fact, some of them can alleviate people’s stress from their daily routine and workplaces. Accordingly, even if those are not the real facts but it plays significant role in people’s lives as a method of pursuing happiness. Furthermore, it is inevitable that the Internet is essential for living in the society since everything is generally connected to the Internet.

In conclusion, I am steadfast of the opinion that the advantages of the Internet can be helpful for living most especially in the modern society.

(254 words, 47 mins)