[IELTS] Solving problems for the future, not for the past

IELTS Writing Task 2

(Question)

People should focus more on solving problems related to the future, and should not spend time thinking about the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Planning

Agree.

Past. irrevocable, irreversible better to keep on thinking about future that people are able to make constructively. Cannot always blame the things that already passed

It is said that solving future issues should be more focused and people need not to think about the things in the past. I firmly agree with the statement that concentrating on the past is detrimental for developing one's’ future.

- One’ future. Great intro!

To begin with, there are two principal reasons for supporting that solving upcoming problems is more significant. First and foremost, obsession with past events is an obstacle for making better future. For example, even if there is a great chance to improve one’s life, people can be reluctant to grab the promising opportunity. It is because they experienced the failure that made them dreadful. According to this situation, it is recommendable for people to overcome the past trauma, and need to be ready for having alternative chances to develop their quality of life.

TOPIC SENTENCE - This is the exact way on how to use this kind of structure, after saying there are principal reasons you immediately write the first reason. When you use this structure make sure is not a repetition of your INTRODUCTION.

In addition to the first reason, since past occurrences are irreversible, people should not stick to them. In fact, it is obvious that there is a possibility to recover the past. The reason for this is that future is not decided so people can change their future based on present life. The past is irrevocable, and I strongly believe that people should think about what they can do for the better future. Moreover, the optimal way of resolving the statement is that people should not do the same mistake that took place in the past, and step forward to the future based on the previous valuable experiences.

Move forward - is best to use

In conclusion, I think that confining to the past events is not the best option for making a enormous success in the future as they are unchangeable. - direct to the point! Very good!

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