[IELTS] Argument of International tourism

IELTS Writing Task 2

(Question)

International tourism is a good business but can lead to fights instead of understanding between tourists and locals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Planning

International tourism

I agree

(1) can give opportunities to make tremendous revenues for local businessmen

(2) can be beneficial in terms of solving misconception of foreign cultures. Can inform of the real traditions. They look local communities in real. Can ask the reality of the misleading concepts. Influx of tourists can be expected

It is said that global tourism is a beneficial business, but sometimes it causes conflicts between tourists and local residents by not acknowledging each other. I steadfastly believe that international tourism is advantageous for local communities.

To begin with, there are two principal reasons for supporting that global tourism is highly recommendable for residents. First and foremost, it can give a great deal of opportunities to make tremendous revenues for local businessmen. The reason for this is that most of the tourists have plenty of money in their wallets to enjoy valuable vacations with beloved ones. In this regard, they are willing to pay a lot of money for purchasing souvenirs and local foods and the like. Accordingly, a large number of tourists play a significant role in local communities’ income, which can also contribute to the national economy.

In addition to the first reason, the advantages of international tourism are obvious in terms of solving misconception of foreign cultures. This is because numerous foreign people are aware of misleading information on the internet. It is a fact that tourists can inform the genuine traditions by experiencing their authentic cultures in the real places. Thanks to this, local communities can expect further influx of tourists by understanding their cultures. In addition, people who have visited local places can share their valuable experiences to potential visitors.

In conclusion, I firmly believe that one cannot emphasize too much the significance of international tourism on the basis of local economy and correcting misleading information.

(250 words, 41 mins)